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Butterflies. 
7th-May-2008 04:59 pm
ace → gonna make you shake

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Pairing/Characters: Yamamoto/Gokudera (Sorry, 8059 just makes me think of a license plate)
Rating: PG-13 (for lots of swearing?)
Words: 223
Notes: Gokudera swears. A lot. And Yamamoto is his devious self. Otherwise this is pretty much a drabble, I think.

(Also, I've never written either of these characters before, so I apologize if anything comes across as OOC)

Disclaimer: Reborn!'s not mine, unfortunately.



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'Get the FUCK out of my face, baseball freak.'

Gokudera's words should be clear enough. He's screaming them right at Yamamoto, whose face is only inches away, how could they not be?

So why won't the fucker stop smiling? Not only is his grin currently splitting his face in fucking two, but Yamamoto's eyes have that manic glint to them that only shows up when he really knows what he's doing.

And Gokudera doesn't want to admit it, but it freaks him the fuck out.

Maybe because he associates it with the graceful, but so fucking deadly, movements of the Shigure Souen Style.

Maybe because it reminds him of pain and blood and things that he only ever remembers when he wakes up sweating and whispering (screaming, crying) for his mother.

Or maybe it's because it's not fear at all that he's feeling, but something far more sinister. Something far more fucked up. Something which fucking involves butterflies of all things and which reminds him of Yamamoto's fucking laughter and his voice and the thought of that does not give Gokudera goosebumps, it's just fucking chilly out - and why the fuck is Yamamoto's face moving closer?!

'You should really run away if you're scared, Hayato.'

'Don't fucking call me -- mmph'

And Gokudera doesn't get any farther than that (to be honest, he isn't exactly interested in trying). Because when Yamamoto really, really wants something, he gets it. Without fail.

And Yamamoto really, really wants to kiss Gokudera.




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Tenses are a weak point of mine and I think I messed with them a little here, so any constructive criticism regarding that is very much appreciated.

Also; flail feeds my muse-o-meter. o/


And...there might be a sequel? Albeit a very short one. I'm working on it~
Comments 
9th-May-2008 03:56 am (UTC)
... *_____* oh wow!
9th-May-2008 04:14 am (UTC)
I really hope that's a good 'wow' and not a 'wow, that's a lot of swear-words-wow'. X3 Thank you, neverthless! :)
9th-May-2008 04:21 am (UTC)
o-of course it's a good wow! swear words don't bother me at all, haha. XD i just thought it was really REALLY good o______o i love how you made Gokudera all freaked out by Yamamoto <3333
9th-May-2008 04:29 am (UTC)
nkldfngmls, I'm glad. I couldn't help but worry. I thought I might have overdone it with the swear words. Somehow my Gokudera always ends up swearing a lot... And...I like to think Yamamoto rattles Gokudera's senses a little bit. :3 So thank you very, very much! Again! ♥
9th-May-2008 04:33 am (UTC)
my Gokudera also swears a lot. D: you're not alone <3 It's just, this fic reminded me of how Reborn's always saying how Yamamoto's got the ability to be a great assassin, and that he's a natural born killer, so this all seemed really authentic and kdshfjh JUST TOTALLY AWESOME. ;w; you're welcome, bb~! ♥♥♥
9th-May-2008 04:39 am (UTC)
R-Really? It managed to do that? jdsfgbdsjlf, I'm so incredibly flattered. 8D I'M FLUTTERING ON LITTLE HAPPY-COMMENT!HIGH WINS RIGHT NOW. Seriously, thank you a million times over, you're making my day with your kind words. ♥!
9th-May-2008 04:42 am (UTC)
yes, yes you totally did! YOU DESERVE TO FEEL THAT WAY /o/ AFTER ALL, YOU WROTE THE FIC. haha, I'm so glad! c-can't wait to read more from you *___________*
9th-May-2008 04:22 am (UTC)
Oh, wow, that's SOCUTE~ ♥♥
9th-May-2008 04:30 am (UTC)
Thank you! 8D
9th-May-2008 05:52 am (UTC)
And Yamamoto really, really wants to kiss Gokudera.
OMG!
9th-May-2008 06:31 am (UTC)
It's TRUE! 8)
9th-May-2008 11:39 am (UTC)
-LOVES-

I love this drabble, it made my morning so much happier ^3^
9th-May-2008 12:00 pm (UTC)
Really? I'm so glad! :D

Thank you! ♥
9th-May-2008 04:33 pm (UTC)
Okay, uhm, yeah. *______* You just made my heart all wibbly and happy and asknksnjgskg I love you. *________* Your Yamamoto WINS. XD
10th-May-2008 02:31 pm (UTC)
bsdjglbdfj, your COMMENT wins! Thank you so very much. 8D
23rd-Nov-2008 02:13 pm (UTC)
BDb durhurhur I liked this~~~~~~
/adds to memories *3*
6th-Apr-2009 01:58 am (UTC)
Yur first time writtin them? i think you got them pretty dead on! :) gokudera was too cute w/ his gruff & tough exterior (but we all know he is a softy inside) and yamamoto was sexy w/ his killer aura!!!
14th-Apr-2009 04:48 am (UTC)
I love it your fic!
u write very good the perspective of Gokudera!
he is soooooooo like that!
and i was imagining the scene!
*____*
yamamoto in a sexy voice saying: 'You should really run away if you're scared, Hayato.'
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
*nose bleed*
14th-Apr-2009 04:51 am (UTC)
ah!
i was about to forgot!
your voice is very beautifull! ^^ i listen the history too!
i wanna write something in english about this too and act!
hmmmmm
i think i will do this sometime!
=P
22nd-Jul-2009 10:42 pm (UTC)
Wao... It's really nice ^_____^ Naa, would you give a permission to translate this drabble into russian? One pal of mine, who isn't really good in english, heard audio-version of this drabble, and she asked, would it be possible to make a translation.
23rd-Jul-2009 05:27 pm (UTC)
Definitely; go right ahead! ♥
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